My brother and I love Star Wars and are excited for the new episodes. However, we recently talked about how the prequel trilogy did not fulfill our expectations. We decided to rewrite the movies. Here is Episode I. Stay tuned for Episodes II and III.
A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away…
The Neimoidian Threat
It is a period of waning peace and security in The Republic. A looming threat has begun to cast its dark shadow as a group called the Neimoidian Brotherhood has decided to strike against the heart of the planet Alderaan.
Due to the generosity of a mysterious benefactor, the Brotherhood built an army to send to the capital of Alderaan. Planning to capture the families of the ruling class, the Neimoidians hope to gain the leverage needed to execute the next phase of their nefarious plans.
On the planet of Alderaan, Prince Bail Organa and his best friend, Padme Amidala, are stuck in the bowels of the Palace of Alderaan with a hostile army between them and the ship that will spirit them away to the planet of Coruscant where protection awaits in the form of the Order of the Jedi Knights…
The movie opens in space and follows a Neimoidian battleship as it enters the atmosphere of the planet Alderaan. It is late in joining the battle as the other ships have already breached the palace and troops are filing into the courts, killing and capturing as they go.